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“Faggot”s in Comics

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I was frustrated to read online that one of the owners of Whatever, reportedly a very good comics shop in San Francisco, was threatening a boycott of Brian K. Vaughan, over the use of the word “faggot” in the first issue of his and Cliff Chiang’s new series Paper Girls. And speaking “as a gay man who owns a comic book store” he called out Image for allowing the creators to use that word.

As a gay man who makes comics, I am troubled by this reactionary outburst.

Cougarich* seems to take his inspiration from the old Comics Code, which categorically banned certain words and subjects from comics in a misguided effort to protect children from them. “Zombie” was banned.  “Crime” couldn’t be in the title. Etc.  “There is NO place for this word especially in comics,” Cougarich declares. But this draconian standard overlooks the important matter of context: immediately after one of the characters calls someone a “faggot”, another character says that you shouldn’t do that.

Under the original terms of Code, it wasn’t permitted to depict drug use, even to condemn it. In order to tell a story showing the dangers of illicit narcotics, Marvel was forced to publish an issue without Code approval. It was actively counter-productive, and the Cougarich Code, with it’s appeal to the Word Police, would do the same thing, disallowing this “teachable moment”.

In a less heated mood, perhaps Cougarich might permit this usage, in the same spirit that the Code would permit the depiction of robberies as long as the perpetrator was properly punished. But even that rule was wrong-headed, and harmful as a universal requirement.

APB_004I’m a bit baffled that one still has to say this in 2015, but: comics aren’t all for children. As an adult, I don’t need a publisher to teach me these life lessons, nor do I need a retailer to protect me from stories that don’t meet his standards of moral obviousness. I recently made a short comic about police brutality, which includes an officer calling characters both “cocksucker” and “faggot”. No one corrects him. He doesn’t get punished for it. Because it’s not that kind of comic. It’s a comic about harsh facts of real life, and it’s intended for readers who are prepared to read about that and to reach their own conclusions about it.

If I was writing for children, I’d avoid those words, because children may not fully understand that context. And if I was writing something for adults that was intended to inoffensive, I’d do the same. But when I’m writing a story for adults about serious matters, I’m going to dialog it with the vocabulary that serious adults use. If someone doesn’t like that, then they are not my audience, and they are invited not to read it… whether they are a puritan from my hometown in the Midwest, or a gay couple from San Francisco.

I am a fierce defender of free speech, but I’m not saying that anyone can write what they want with no consequences. If a retailer feels that someone’s work is offensive, they have a right to say so, and even not to sell it. But I would hope they would apply a more insightful standard than this. And I also have the right to speak up and say when I disagree, and in this case I do emphatically.

And I do this because I am a gay man, one who labors under burdensome rules saying that I can’t post (this), and I can’t sell comics containing (that). I would very much like to sell my comics in stores, but because of the explicitly homosexual content, the number who would carry them is very small. And it’s sadly ironic that, because I use the word “faggot” in dialog – because people do – a store owned by a gay couple would be on the side of those who would not.

* Since the statement was posted under an account shared by the owners I don’t know which of the two was the author, so I’ll refer to them by the name used on the account.

Everybody’s Doin’ It!

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When Dale Lazarov offered to write a script for me to illustrate, I hesitated for several seconds before jumping at it. He’s the writer of several justifiably acclaimed books of gay erotic comics, and illustrating one of his stories was bound to be a lot of fun.

00aEverybodyCoverIt was. And now it’s on sale as a digital download (DRM-free, none of that online “rental” business) for just $2.85! This is the same story that was presented in Best Gay Erotica 2014, but at full size, full resolution, and in glorious color.

The plot – yes, plot: Dale writes stories, not just sex scenes – is four somewhat-parallel storylines (inspired by a similar technique used by Rick Veitch in Bratpack). A lanky cowboy and a husky workman meet on a dark city street, two African-American men connect at a professional mixer, a couple of gay geeks play with their action figures, a leather-jacketed Latino and a preppy Asian bodybuilder hook up in a bar. And things develop from there, with each couple ending in a different circumstance than they started. It’s a celebration of consensual, safe, enjoyable sex, whether it’s between strangers, acquaintances, partners, or new friends.

I’m ridiculously proud of the illustration work I did on this book, and the fact that it’s the first comic I’ve created that’s being sold as a stand-alone item (rather than being included in an anthology or just given away online) has me really excited!

I hope you will be too. :)

Best Gay Erotica in hand

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I just got my comp copies of Best Gay Erotica 2014!  Right there, starting on page 174 (which is inexplicably missing its page number), sandwiched by Dan Cavanaugh’s “Coach’s Pussy” and Max Vos’ “A Walk in the Park”, is all 13 pages of my and Dale Lazarov‘s “Everybody’s Doin’ It”!

To be honest, it’s not the best possible presentation of the art.  The book is smaller than a standard comic, with margins of the size commonly found in prose books, and recoloring the line art for gray-scale (instead of color) left it looking a bit muddy.  But this is a prose book, after all, printed on a press designed for type, and Cleis Press reproduced the comic about as well as one could hope for, given the format.  And most importantly, editor Larry Duplechan spelled my name and my web address correctly in my “about the authors” blurb. :)

And since I already know that Larry has excellent taste in queer porn … I got me some reading to do!

Best Gay Erotica 2014

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I just got a check in the mail as payment for the inclusion of my-and-Dale-Lazarov‘s “Everybody’s Doin’ It” in Cleis PressBest Gay Erotica 2014.*  This isn’t the first payment I’ve received for publication of my work, nor is it the first story to actually go to press (those were the Anything That Loves story), but this was my first contracted exchange of rights for money … just with a longer lead time.

You know, it’s colder than Hell outside tonight, and I was really looking forward to Kraft Dinner with leftover Christmas turkey stirred in, and a quiet evening curled up with a warm drawing tablet.  But I think tonight the Baxter Street Home for Wayward Boys will be having an outing instead: dinner at the Green Carnation, followed by drinks at the Subversion Lounge downtown.

*Available any day now in better … are there any brick-and-mortar gay bookstores left anywhere?  Anyway, available to order for shipping any day now from better web retailers everywhere.

Detective Comics #27

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Thanks to resetting the numbering on all of their ongoing titles, DC is about to publish another Detective Comics #27.  The first one was the first appearance of Batman, so this one is a special oversize, overpriced issue with multiple covers to choose from (or buy them all).  One of them is by former Batman legend Frank Miller.

My friend Richard Pace responded with a parody of it:

Inspired, I responded with a couple of my own.

The first is a reaction to the fact that Catwoman has nothing to do with the landmark issue. She wasn’t in it. Batman was. So was Commissioner Gordon:

The second refers to the issue about a year later that introduced Robin. Since DC started over with #1, they have yet to reintroduce Stephanie Brown, a character with a strong fan following, who briefly had the role of Robin, before being killed for cheap shock value. (as happens far too often these days in superhero comics). So I figured they should bring her back in the same issue:

The Nude 52!

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Today is the official launch of The Nude 52!

It’s exactly what you think it is: DC superheroes without their clothes on. It’s a silly pun, a creative exercise, a celebration of the human form, and just something fun to do. These pin-ups will range from innocent to a little raunchy, with the main focus on artistic expression and creativity.

I’ll be doing a lot of them myself, but to make it more fun for everyone I’ve also opened it up for other artists to contribute, and I’ve already received a few great pieces, the first of which is posted today. (There are instructions on the web site for artists who want to participate.) I’ll be posting one new drawing each week … for a year.

So far we have drawings of the Flash, Superman, and Wonder Woman. Coming up in the next couple weeks are Robin and Lobo. Other characters on the drawing table include Power Girl, Kamandi, Green Lantern John Stewart, the Doom Patrol, and the Legion of Super Heroes!

Work! – This Book Kills Fascists

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A few years ago, I was part of a small crowd of comix creators who worked on an anthology of short pieces based on songs about work and working people. It was going to be called simply Work!

Unfortunately the editors were unable to find a publisher who was interested, and the project fizzled out. But the good news is that I got a few scripts written for it, and a couple of them were illustrated, enabling me to demonstrate that I could … do the work.

I designed a little “warning label” to go on the book, inspired by those silly “parental advisory” labels they used to put on CDs, and by the famous inscription on Woody Guthrie’s guitar: “This Machine Kills Fascists”.

Work! – The Tramp

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This is a story called “The Tramp”, written by me and illustrated by Bevis Musson. It was made for an anthology that didn’t quite happen, called Work!, which was to be a collection of comics based on songs about labor and working people.

This story is based on “The Tramp” a song written by 1910s Swedish-American labor activist Joe Hill. His “tramp” was a hobo, but we reinterpreted the tale using the more modern sense of the word. The original lyrics follow the comic, along with some commentary about the song and the adaptation process.

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Hill’s original lyrics are a sort of parody of “Tramp, Tramp, Tramp, the Boys are Marching”, a Civil War marching song. It’s sung to the same tune, which is much better known today as the melody for “Jesus Loves the Little Children”. So sing along:

If you all will shut your trap,
I will tell you ’bout a chap,
That was broke and up against it, too, for fair;
He was not the kind to shirk,
He was looking hard for work,
But he heard the same old story everywhere.

(chorus):
Tramp, tramp, tramp, keep on a-tramping,
Nothing doing here for you;
If I catch you ’round again,
You will wear the ball and chain,
Keep on tramping, that’s the best thing you can do.

He walked up and down the street,
‘Til the shoes fell off his feet.
In a house he spied a lady cooking stew,
And he said, “How do you do,
May I chop some wood for you?”
What the lady told him made him feel so blue.

(chorus)

‘Cross the street a sign he read,
“Work for Jesus” so it said,
And he said, “Here is my chance, I’ll surely try,”
And he kneeled upon the floor,
Till his knees got rather sore,
But at eating-time he heard the preacher cry–

(chorus)

Down the street he met a cop,
And the copper made him stop,
And he asked him, “When did you blow into town?
Come with me up to the judge,”
But the judge he said, “Oh fudge,
Bums that have no money needn’t come around.”

(chorus)

Finally came that happy day
When his life did pass away,
He was sure he’d go to heaven when he died,
When he reached the pearly gate,
Santa Peter, mean old skate,
Slammed the gate right in his face and loudly cried:

(chorus)

In despair he went to Hell,
With the Devil for to dwell,
For the reason he’d no other place to go.
And he said, “I’m full of sin,
So for Christ’s sake, let me in!”
But the Devil said, “Oh, beat it! You’re a ‘bo!’

Some things haven’t changed in 100 years, and today you could still tell the same story about the kind of tramp that Hill wrote about. But the meaning of the word has changed, and you can also tell the same story about a modern “tramp”: a woman who turns to sex work to support herself.

In adapting this, I wanted to maintain the feel and structure of it as a song. Skipping the first verse that sets the stage, I adapted each verse into a one-page episode. The verses are each 6 lines, so I wrote 6 panels per page. Bevis took that a step further, reflecting the pair of triplets in each verse by drawing it in 2 rows of 3 panels each, a challenging format which he pulled off beautifully.

I took a few liberties with the story itself, reflecting that this was a different kind of tramp: equally willing to do any job, but with different opportunities to try for. I swapped the order of verses 3 and 4 (the preacher and the cop) for two reasons: 1) that sequence of events flowed more naturally in my story, and 2) it allowed for the more dramatic re-appearance of the blue car in the adaptation of verse 5 (the tramp’s death).

For the dialog, I borrowed from Hill’s lyrics (e.g. “nothing doing” “if I catch you round again”). I couldn’t match his AABCCB rhyme pattern, but for the closing line of each page I wrote a rhyming couplet, in the form of “you’re a tramp so keep on tramping” – but with different slurs. By a coincidence of slang, I was able to update Hill’s closing line “you’re a ‘bo” (short for “hobo”) to “you’re a ho'” (short for whore).

Hill’s lyrics didn’t specify what kind of preacher his Tramp turned to, but the Salvation Army was the clear choice. Hill and his fellow Wobblies (Industrial Workers of the World) held the “Starvation Army” in contempt. Hill’s song “The Preacher and the Slave” (a parody of their hymn “In the Sweet By-and-By”) coined the phrase “pie in the sky”, referring to the Salvationists’ empty promises of eventual comfort in Heaven. I also gave our Tramp a line referring to that.

Joe Hill’s own death is an interesting story. He was charged with shooting a former police officer and his son (who’d apparently shot back), justified by a gunshot wound which Hill said he’d received from a jealous rival for a woman’s affections. He was convicted based mostly on his association with the Wobblies and unconvincing witness identifications. No less than Woodrow Wilson and Helen Keller argued for clemency, but the Utah Supreme Court upheld his death sentence. At his execution, as the presiding deputy said, “Ready… aim…” Hill interrupted: “Fire — go on and fire!”

He left a written statement which said, in part, “Don’t waste any time in mourning. Organize…” This piece is dedicated to his legacy.

What’s Wrong With Kindle Worlds

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Amazon recently announced “Kindle Worlds”, a scheme in which the owners of popular entertainment franchises license their characters and settings, for fans to write their own stories using them. In other words: legal fanfic.  Some Warner TV shows were the first, then Valiant Comics, and others will follow, I’m sure.

Kindle Worlds seems at first blush like a nifty set-up. The owners of the “intellectual property” don’t exercise any editorial control over the stories (well, mostly: you can’t do porn), so the fans are free to be creative. And furthermore, they offer these fan writers the chance to actually make money from these stories, which has always been a blatant violation of copyright law.

But there are two key provisions the contract from Amazon which combine to make it a bad deal for writers who participate:

The first provision gives Amazon and their partners perpetual exclusive rights to the writer’s stories. Not just the specific paragraphs and sentences, but the characters and settings they contain. For example, if I write a story using the Vampire Diaries characters, and introduce a new character of my own, I can’t use that character in any other story I ever write, even if the story doesn’t involve any official character from Mystic Falls … or the setting of Mystic Falls itself. As an another example, if I decide that the plot of my story is really clever, and adapt it into a stand-alone story with my own characters, I can’t publish that story elsewhere. There’s no time limit, no rights-reversion: my original characters and my original story are restricted by Warner (or whoever the IP holder is).

Second, the contract grants the IP holder the rights to exploit your characters and settings in any way they see fit, without any further compensation. Sure, I get paid for each copy of my story that’s purchased by another fan to read on their Kindle. But if my characters show up in a future episode of the TV show, or my story is used as the basis for a season-long story arc, I get nothing for that. This isn’t just speculation; the contract spells it out very clearly.

They say that the creator retains the copyright … but strip away the most important benefits of copyright: the right to control it, and much of the right to profit from it.

Twenty years ago, the founders of Image Comics walked away from Marvel Comics over Work-For-Hire contracts that were more favorable to them than this. To this day, WFH tends to exploit creators in much the same way, but at least it does so while paying respectable page rates (which are not dependent on sales). The Big Two also have “creator participation” programs that (while not as good as they should be) at least give some money to the people who create new characters for them. Participants in Kindle Worlds give away their creations on the cheap.

Speaking of rates, be aware that Amazon will determine how much to charge for your work. If you think that $3.99 is the optimal price for it, but Amazon thinks it’s worth $0.99, that’s the number you’ll be making royalties based on. Or if you want to keep the price low (or even zero, which isn’t allowed), because you want to reach as wide an audience as possible, but Amazon disagrees… they again set the price.

I’ve seen it argued – by fans indulging in a bit of fantasy wishful thinking – that this program gives authors an opportunity. Not just to make a little money, but to use this system as a launchpad for greater success. Like E.L. James, the author of 50 Shades of Gray, which started out as Twilight fanfic, they point out. But James was a fluke, a one-in-a-billion exception. (“So you’re saying there’s a chance!” the relentlessly exploitable fan answers.) Secondly, she didn’t make money on 50 Shades as fanfic, but by revising it and releasing it as a separate work, which isn’t allowed under Kindle Worlds rules. Third, if she had published it as Twilight fanfic, it would have been shunned by the “legitimate” publishing world, which considers fanfic to be even lower than “vanity publishing”. Having either of those on your literary resumé won’t help your chances of making it in the publishing world. And Kindle Worlds is both: fanfic and vanity publishing.

Now, there is a special case, which is somewhat different from the rest of the publishing world: comics. For various reasons, the comics industry views both fanfic and self-publishing differently. Because it’s relied for so long on corporate-owned characters, which have been written in turn by generations of former fans, the idea of fanfic is not scorned so strongly. The current adventures of Superman and Captain America are in some ways like fanfic, but authorized and paid for by the companies which own the characters. Meanwhile, the history of plucky independent “publishers” which are little more than the creators themselves wearing different hats, similarly recasts self-publishing as something that is admired rather than looked down upon. This leads some comics fans to look at Kindle Worlds (anticipating their their favorite comics characters will become available thru the system) as just another way to do what current pros have been doing.

But the current adventures of the spandex-wearing heroes are not mere fanfic. They are plotted and scripted by hand-picked writers under very strict editorial control. This is why a writing credit working for Marvel or DC is very different from a writing credit on a Kindle Worlds story would be. Showing that you can write a stand-alone short story in prose featuring Batman is not going to land you a gig writing Detective Comics, because what you’re doing and what that job requires are very different things.

The reason why self-publishing is respected in the comics industry is because of the dedication and industriousness it demonstrates. You have to be good too, but showing that you’re serious and dependable is essential to getting you a job working for someone else (if that’s what you’re looking for). Writing short stories on your own time and uploading them to Amazon simply doesn’t have that kind of impressiveness to it.

If you want to be a professional writer, there are other ways of trying to make that happen. They’re tested ways, that – talent and luck permitting – work. Kindle Worlds might be fun. It might make you a little money. It might even develop you a small fanbase. But if you expect that you can then leverage that into a career writing other stuff, stuff that you will own, that’s all original … don’t count on it. There are talented writers and artists who have developed a fanbase while doing WFH for DC or Marvel, but who find that those fans don’t follow them when they do fully original work. It’s because those aren’t fans of the creators; they’re fans of the characters. So don’t kid yourself that an Kindle Worlds audience will follow you to your own.

Despite all this, you might still be interested enough to give Kindle Worlds a try.  There’s nothing dishonorable about doing Work For Hire … but you need to go into it with your eyes open, with full understanding of what you’re giving up when you do it.